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News story persuasive essay order of importance

1/13/2016

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Breaking news!

Yesterday a mermaid was spotted in the Fraser River. Some say it was just a dolphin, today we are going to interview a young girl who claims she saw the mermaid. '' did you see a mermaid little girl?'' '' yes I did and she had a long blue tail and pretty blonde hair!'' '' thank you little girl!'', back to Lily at the studio, thanks Bob! In the past there has been a lot of mermaid ''sightings'' but is this real proof that this mythical creature really is real? Thats all for this news story but stay tuned for our next story about Mr. whiskers the cat and his amazing survival story!
1 Comment
Ms.Bains
1/13/2016 02:00:52 pm

I like that you chose to write about a Mermaid news story! It sounds really interesting as a reader I wish there was more information on this story as I want to read more. I would like to encourage you to add detail to your writing.

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